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Post #3: Completed Skull

9/7/2020

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Progress

To complete my skull, there were three extremely helpful actions. The first was to make a few broad adjustments based on the photos from my last post. After looking at the images and retaking some measurements, I realized I needed to actually remove some mass, not continue to add as I had been. This was especially helpful for the chin and jaws.
The second helpful thing was Richard's feedback about using the clay to "draw" on the form in an almost exaggerated way and then refining, removing, and reshaping the additions. This was particularly helpful with the eyes, temples, and cheekbones.
The last thing was looking at the model skulls in close proximity to my work. It was much easier to compare angles and negative space when I could put them side-by-side. Additionally, I had both skulls next to me for a few minutes, and this helped me to see which parts of the skull seemed more like a "rule" and where there might be a little more flexibility. I found this helped a great deal with the cheekbones, jaw, and teeth.

Areas to Improve

I believe my skull is still a bit lopsided. Perhaps this could have been fixed if I had more time to dedicated to it. 
Additionally, its surface is quite irregular. I am still not as comfortable with the tools, including the paddle, as I probably ought to be. I don't know if I am simply unskilled with them and so I don't trust them, or if the novelty of the tactility of a new medium is too enjoyable for me to bother with tools. I will admit to be a bit infatuation with the marks fingers leave on the clay.
The proportions of the skull are still not perfect, and part of it is a bit thick and clunky where I think it perhaps should have been rendered more delicately.
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Who looks more like death?
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Post #2: Human Skull (or, This Isn't Going Well)

9/1/2020

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At the beginning of the skull, I felt pretty good about the shapes and material, but it was laughably small. The first real challenge was to actually apply my measurements instead of being afraid to add mass. 









​After adding some mass and eyes, I felt much better about it. However, adding the eyes may have been premature; further measurement showed that it was still too small, particularly vertically (disheartening, since the other issue with it at this juncture is that it is uncommonly and unrealistically narrow. 
To fix this, I just added mass to the chin. This was a mistake, as you will see below. 
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Skull with important - and flawed - contours outlined in red
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Subject with respective contours outlined in blue
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Both images overlaid with outlines to illustrate the dramatic inaccuracies
The main issue at this point is simply that everything on the front of the face needs moved down. Second to that, the top of the skull needs a bit of attention, as its current shape gives the impression that the face is slowly sliding off the front of the head. The jaw will also need addressed aggressively, although since the lower half of the face is so new, this is not surprising and a lower priority. 
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Applying the rule of thirds seemed redundant since I just compared my skull to my actual head, but moving the eyes and nose down in this photo does immediately help it to look more human (although still bizarrely narrow. I keep measuring, but it keeps being SO NARROW!)
However, something about this skull still doesn't feel right -- aside from its lack of width. I have always been aware that my forehead is perhaps a bit large and wanted to see if the rough rule of thirds was actually what needed applied here.
Looks like the eyes and nose will need to move down even further than I initially anticipated in the previous mock-ups, since it looks like the top of my eye sockets (assuming they more or less align with my eyebrow) are significantly lower than 1/3 down from the top of my skull (even if the top line accounts for a bit of hair volume)

NEXT STEPS

1. Refine the top of the skull as much as possible. With some refining and adding a bit of mass at the top, it's possible the eyes won't need to move done quite as much.
2. Adjust eyes/nose. The cheekbones and temples may also need adjusted downwards, however, I'm not confident that they aren't contributing to the issue of the skull appearing squished from the front.
3. Widen the skull? I will retake my measurements horizontally and see if I can't uncover the issue with the skull being so narrow. If this doesn't work, I will compare it with a photo of my head. 
4. That jaw tho. While I understand that the lower half of the face is not expected to be as refined yet, its basic form needs a lot of work. The existing form is based more on how I thought it should look than an understanding of the measurements I took. It is very​ likely that I added too much mass when trying to correct the small size.
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Blog Post #1: Peppers

8/27/2020

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Challenges

The biggest challenge with the first assignment of creating peppers out of the clay was simply trying to render a three-dimensional understanding into a three-dimensional output. My visual style has been almost exclusively translating three dimensions into two. For three dimensions, even when I have an understanding of what the planes of the pepper were doing (where they were concave, where they were convex, their angles), I struggled to successfully reproduce them from in the round with the clay. 

Successes

The primary success was that I felt that I improved in the three-dimensional "seeing" of the peppers' dimensions. Unfortunately, this success is an ongoing process that has yet to communicate much into the output.

Peppers

The pepper on the left is by and large the stronger pepper, although it is still in many ways too round. The pepper on the right is the less successful representation, but was more successful in terms of comfort with the material.
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    Olivia Hinkel,
    Seeking MFA with TAMU-CC
    Loves color and paper
    Eats too much popcorn
    Has a Buffy reaction gif for every scenario.

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    Every scenario.

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